you did a good letter because you said you were going to be sensible for the job and I see you as a hard loyal worker, example “ i will work my hardest every single minutes-” Did you enjoy writing that pretend letter ? If you did what was your favorite part ? You should add why you did the letter and what did you do it for. You also added to “ands” in the same sentence. Kind regards Ian.
Wow, you are really helpful! I really like your letter, well done.
ReplyDeleteHi Arli,
ReplyDeleteyou did a good letter.
Did you enjoy writing that letter ?
You should add why you did it.
Kind regards Ian.
Canterbury
Yaldhurst Model School.
I have improved my comment to you:
DeleteHi Arli,
you did a good letter because you said you were going to be sensible for the job and I see you as a hard loyal worker, example “ i will work my hardest every single minutes-”
Did you enjoy writing that pretend letter ?
If you did what was your favorite part ?
You should add why you did the letter and what did you do it for.
You also added to “ands” in the same sentence.
Kind regards Ian.
Canterbury
Yaldhurst Model School.