Tuesday 23 July 2019

Should students be allowed cell phones at school

Introduction: Do you want blindness? do you want to be addicted and not see what's going on around you in the REAL WORLD? do you want to learn educate not have a life only your phone? well then i would consider GETTING OFF YOUR PHONE Should students be allowed phones at school? What do you think?. Statements: Imagine all the cyber bullying that would go around and the teachers won't be able to control the mobile phone is too little and hard to control and complicated. Also, kids have their own privacy on their phones for nobody to look at and be nosey. Phones could be stolen or misplaced which would be a big problem. Imagine the distractions of social media texting friends,games,youtube and more. Phones can distract others from doing work also. Its proven that using your phone makes you tired , grumpy , addicted , obese , diabetes , heart diseases and other conditions it's basically frying your brain. Conclusion: There are my statements how i think that students shouldnt be allowed phones at school. how about you? what do you think? what's your opinion?.

5 comments:

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  2. thats my feedback

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  3. i liked the way that u explained it and i should say no students cant be allowed phones at school its distracts them

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  4. Kia ora my name is Indie,I am in Mamaku 3 at Grey Main school, I like how you have alot of information on what could happen if you brought a phone to school, this is to good to incorrect anything on this post.
    Indie

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  5. Hey Arli. Nice argument that you have done. You really explained why we should not have phones at school. Maybe next time you could put it in paragraphs . Good job from James

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