explanation 4 how tears form week 7

Kia Ora guys today I want to share my piece of writing for the week about what happens in the anatomy when you cry enjoy.
Sadness happiness and anger the 3 most common emotions but when these emotions come in a vast form they all end up in the same situation tears, tears of happiness tears of sadness and tears of anger but havent you always wonder what triggers these tears inside the anatomy well lucky for you thats what im going to be writing about enjoy.

Tears, tears come in many different forms but always come from a strong flood of emotions as i said in the intro but where do they come from.

They come from a gland just above your eyelid. This gland is called a lacrimal gland, when a range of different feelings evaluate to an extent they trigger this lacrimal gland then tears start to invade and spread over and across the surface of the eye when you blink. They then disappear and drain into small holes in the corners of your upper and also lower eyelids right before traveling like a emotional roller coaster down your tear ducts into your nose (that's why you get a runny nose most the time when you cry) as your tears are streaming down your face suddenly stopping regularly on your checks like a young boy stopping too trick or treat on every house of his street hungry for scary halloween candy and then steaming it to the next house.

So maybe next time your crying you will understand what's actually happening to you.

Explanation writing 3

Kia Ora guys and gals today i'm going to share my third explanation piece of writing i have been working on this week it's about how tornadoes form.

Tornados and upside down soft serve ice cream pumping out high and very powerful winds and its twists and turns destroying everything in its path these natural phenomena are the most dramatic types of weather these moody and very agitated funnels HOW DO THEY FORM?! Well lucky for you that's what I'm going to be talking about today.

Tornados usually happen on a nice beautiful sunny day when the blurred blistering sun sends it heat beams too our earth in only 499 seconds that's why light is the fastest thing humans know of in the universe because that's the time it takes to travel 151.4 million km, any ways apart from the interrupting cool facts the sun heat up the ground and our cool air near the surface is heated all cosy and warm and because of that it rises typically this air will develop into a soft silky shallow cloud so called the cumulus clouds but only if our atmosphere is unstable this warm air will continue to rise to staggering heights and continue to turn into tall cumulonimbus clouds the sort you might see during a thunderstorm
Where this happens in an environment where the winds go from mellow to very strong with height, (known as the wind shear) typically when you have strong winds it twist and turns with a frightening whistle well that's what happens to the higher and stronger wind of the large cloud causing that wind to spin and slide down to the less agro wind slower winde below this creates an invisible horizontal wind spinning and rolling like a cylinder powerful warm so called updraughts tilt the cylinder vertically, creating a column of powerful spinning winds causing the cylinder to flip up like a can of soda.

Thunderstorms that exhibit persistent deep rotating updraughts, are a storm named (super) cells

Falling downdraughts of cold air sent down from the (supercell) help to bring the spinning cylinder column downwards towards the ground, eventually the rotation of the column? may become so strongly focused that a narrow funnel of violent air forms if this reaches the ground the tornado is born and living the most powerful tornadoes have speech stuttering winds exceeding 400km per hour and can lift trucks and destroy large buildings.

So everybody be aware if there is a stormy looking cloud on a sunny day because it could possibly be the start of a tornado.

Writing by Arli robson.

success criteria Arli & Riley 2020 term3

Kia Ora guys today i would like to share my writing success criteria this is a graph of what i think and my peer thinks about my explanation writing.

Success Criteria

WALT: write an explanation

We will be successful when we;	Self	Peer
Opening statement: Introduces the topic (person, place or       facility) and defines it.	234	iiiiiiii
Body: Points of the explanation supported by examples or        facts.	324	iiiiiiii
Closing statement: Summarises the main points	i 71`1111	iiiiiiii
Uses words that shows the relationship between ideas e.g.       because, then, so, if...	343	iiiiiiii
Uses technical language	352	iiiiiiiii
Can include diagrams to support ideas	222	iiiiiiiiii
Uses paragraphs logically	1111111111111	iiiiiiii
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